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Commentary paper
By studying about the struggles and challenges faced by international student, as an international student myself, I write my editorial paper in a first person view. By choosing to write in this style is because I want show the audience by using ethos on this topic, so it is easier for the audience to believe what I am talking about because it is based on my self experience.
Firstly, by stating the problem in the opening paragraph, I try to attract the audience so they have the willingness of continue reading the paper, hooking their attention. In the following paragraph, I state the opposition side of argument, showing that I have noticed there are opposition for this argument, and then by striking it down with the following essay, it can seem to be more persuasive then just only stating one side story. By using ethos, pathos and logos, I try to lead the audience to my side of view, let them see this problem in different side of views, maybe ending up changing the reader’s original knowledge about this.
What is different with the research paper and the editorial paper is that research paper is only giving a general view on both side, talking about what international students should improve and what universities in America should provide them. It is written in a formal style and it should flow smoothly without any of self emotions. It is an informative writing style which provides the readers a lot of facts and data, showing them that all the research done on this topic. On the other hand, an editorial paper is a more rhetorical situation argument. It is written with a purpose and more one side argument, using less formal or even informal style of writing to present my information. By doing this, using easier wording and communication style writing, the uses of pathos will be easier to reach out to the audience. This will let the audience feel that the editorial is communicating with them rather than being talked over.
Another difference between the research paper and the editorial paper is that whenever I use information in the research paper, I always provide citation. However, in the editorial paper I do not provide citation.
By writing the research paper and editorial paper, both of them have their own unique way of presenting the same information. In research paper, it is a formal, solid hard fact, informative writing without emotion or one side argument. Reversely, an editorial paper is providing an argument in a rhetorical way; it is more of a communication way to present the evidence towards the audience. It is written in an informal style with uses of ethos, pathos and logos to persuade the audience to think what the author thinks.
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Additions:
Commentary paper
By studying about the struggles and challenges faced by international student, as an international student myself, I write my editorial paper in a first person view. By choosing to write in this style is because I want show the audience by using ethos on this topic, so it is easier for the audience to believe what I am talking about because it is based on my self experience.
Firstly, by stating the problem in the opening paragraph, I try to attract the audience so they have the willingness of continue reading the paper, hooking their attention. In the following paragraph, I state the opposition side of argument, showing that I have noticed there are opposition for this argument, and then by striking it down with the following essay, it can seem to be more persuasive then just only stating one side story. By using ethos, pathos and logos, I try to lead the audience to my side of view, let them see this problem in different side of views, maybe ending up changing the reader’s original knowledge about this.
What is different with the research paper and the editorial paper is that research paper is only giving a general view on both side, talking about what international students should improve and what universities in America should provide them. It is written in a formal style and it should flow smoothly without any of self emotions. It is an informative writing style which provides the readers a lot of facts and data, showing them that all the research done on this topic. On the other hand, an editorial paper is a more rhetorical situation argument. It is written with a purpose and more one side argument, using less formal or even informal style of writing to present my information. By doing this, using easier wording and communication style writing, the uses of pathos will be easier to reach out to the audience. This will let the audience feel that the editorial is communicating with them rather than being talked over.
Another difference between the research paper and the editorial paper is that whenever I use information in the research paper, I always provide citation. However, in the editorial paper I do not provide citation.
By writing the research paper and editorial paper, both of them have their own unique way of presenting the same information. In research paper, it is a formal, solid hard fact, informative writing without emotion or one side argument. Reversely, an editorial paper is providing an argument in a rhetorical way; it is more of a communication way to present the evidence towards the audience. It is written in an informal style with uses of ethos, pathos and logos to persuade the audience to think what the author thinks.
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